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7/1/2015 05:52:52
Reminds me of "there will come soft rains" by Ray Bradbury. No humans at all only machinery. Well done in such a short piece.
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Leigh
8/1/2015 09:05:23
Thanks for the comment!
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Rachelle
8/1/2015 16:33:47
very profound and deep thoughts put into this short story.
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Leigh
12/1/2015 11:51:15
Thanks so much for all your nice comments!
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Nat R
13/2/2015 13:06:16
Lovely story! I particularly like the way you manage to be both playful and serious. The names Oneji, Twoji and Threeji feel charmingly playful in my mind's ear, while the theme and thoughts are anything but trivial. The story also has a retro feel - glass figurines, androids that plug in - that accentuates the sweetness.
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